UNTITLED (dun dun duuuuuuuuun)

by Kayla Brooke
(S,SC,USA )

Son #1: Hey dad, can I go outside?
Dad #2: What would your mother say?
Son #3: I dunno, what would she say dad?
Dad #4: .... GO ASK YOUR MOTHER.
Mom #5: What do you want?
Son #6: Mom, can I go outside?
Mom #7: No, now go feed your animals.
Son #8: ooooooookaaaaaaaaaaaaay
Son #9: Hey guys... you hungry?
Monster #10: YES AND I WANT TO EAT YOOOOOOOOU!!!!
Leprechaun #11: Meh sure why not... how booout your brains with a side of lamb?!
Troll #12: ME WANT FOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD
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I have added this in, just for laughs, you dont have to add it in.

Son #13: Love you too guys. Lemme go upstairs to get the dog food, I'll be right back.

************************ 4 Days Later ***********************

Son #14: HEY GUUUYS I GOT THE DOG FOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Sorry it stinks as a comic, I'm not that great at writing comics, seeing as how I mostly work on novels......

and im not giving my location out, sorry. ill hint at it, but thats IT.

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Hi Kayla!
by: Martin

Nice submission! I think it's good and creative. You are also the first one who had the idea to extend the scenario beyond the template. Very clever!

Great job! :)

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