The Deadly Tooth

by Alyssa
(Singapore)

The ninja sliced the vampire head with one swing and killed the vampire once and for all.Little did he know that one of the vampire's teeth transformed into a deadly snake and bit the ninja.The ninja became the possessed minion of the evil vampire............

Vampire: Vahahaha! Vith vis new body,I can vave an vinfinite minions of vampires! Vahahahaha!

Somewhere.....in the deep inside....the ninja still had consciousness....trying to break out of the spell....

Ninja: Huff....Puff....It's no use...can't break out....*faint*

In the forest....there was a good witch...watching it all...

Witch:Oh no....The evil have won.....I have to do something.........



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Feb 18, 2010
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Hi Alyssa!
by: Martin

Nice little story! Very creative!

I also like the fact that you introduce a character that isn't onscreen!

Thanks!

:)

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